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1SG. Caltrop overhears some commotion within a tent.
I wonder what PFC. Cooper and SP5. McCulin are up to...
I wonder what PFC. Cooper and SP5. McCulin are up to...
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Great job with this one. I have to say that the simplicity of this mixed with the supposed innuendo really gives it a good ring. Not to mention that it's just downright funny!
My favorite part of this whole thing is probably the 1st Sergeant's expressions as he overhears the commotion going on in the tent. It just adds to the hilarity of the final panel.
Considering that we all probably have dirty minds, I'm sure that most who see this can't help but grin sheepishly and laugh as they read the the gigantic words "JENGA!"
However, I do also think that background could use some more things. For instance, the sky. Perhaps a cloud or two to fill that blank space underneath the text. Also, on the green bit on the right, perhaps a formation of ponies drilling or something. You know, just to add more to the image. But you don't have to; I understand it may be a bit difficult to do so.
So once again, great job with this one. You put a smile on my face this morning. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>